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15. 02/25/08, 11:46 am
Says: "Kayla-
2nd and 3rd draft not in html format.
Last sentence of Scriptwriting journal includes word “rally.” It should be “really.”
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14. 02/13/08, 03:30 pm
Says: "This draft came out very well. I found maybe two things that i suggested fixing. There just my personal thoughts no vocab corections or anything like that. I can't wait to see how well this movie will come out. "
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13. 02/01/08, 02:03 pm
Says: "I corrected Kayla's secind draft of the script. It realy didn't need that much repair it was just script gramer mostly. The script looks good I hope to see it on the screen soon."
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12. 01/10/08, 11:23 pm
Says: "This is Michael Martins giving his input on you first draft of your script. We sat down and talked about the basic things I suggested correcting. There wasn’t much for you to fix. I suggested that for the sections of song you wrote in the script be labelled as SONG because they were just random paragraphs in the middle of the page that looked like song lyrics. Also there were a few points wear a character was introduce but the name was not in complete caps. After that there was not much else. I like the story that is being portrayed in the script and I think the audience will under stand it and will be hit emotionally. I have no suggestions story wise because I believe the story is fine. I hope the movie comes out well and I look forward to reading this script again."
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11. 11/09/07, 06:43 pm
Says: "Three paragraphs: I think your capstone is the most personal one. Also, I think by doing it this way will make it a touching film. I don't see any major faults in your paragraphs but try to condense the middle paragraph."
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