Time for even more feedback. As you know, this is your chance to get and provide feedback on your script. Due to the detail required, you will only be providing feedback on one student.
Here are the partners for this task:
Mike Baer - James Galvin
Nicole Beaudoin - Keith Desjardin
Felix Colon - Gage Dunham
Michael Martins - Kayla MCarthy
Ruby Mason - Naomi Delannoy
April Nicholas - Rashaa Al-Sasah
Amanda Whalen - Nick Beaudoin
Kelsey Cote - Bobbie Menard
Nicollette Forte - Meaghan Richmond
Kyle Schoolcraft - Amber Martin
Sarah Hoyle - Samantha Watier
Kira Hawkridge - Ashley Gonzalez
Ken Smith -
Those that have not submitted their second draft script are not listed. They include:
Michaela Jasinowski
Chris Pascale
Brandi Rivera
Alisha Santos
Megan Skally
Mandy Sullivan
Rob Angell
Luz Vega
Here is the procedure for providing feedback:
-Get a copy of your partner's script from Mr. Skeldon.
-Read it thoroughly, writing comments directly on the script. Pay particular attention to the following areas:
- Script format;
- Clarity of storyline;
- Inclusion of Arts Major;
- Length (i.e., if it's too short, offer ways to lengthen; if it's too long, offer suggestions for cutting);
- Spelling and grammar.
-Submit your partner's script, containing all your comments to Mr. Skeldon by Wednesday, February 13, 2008.
-Post a one to three paragraph summary of your findings on your partner's e-portfolio by Friday, February 15, 2008.