(opening scene)
Camera Zooms in while backing out-
--Main Characters--
1) Joey: "The kid that doesn't have that many friends in school and is mostly quiet"
Mrs. carter: "Joey is her son, works multiple jobs and has no time for her son. She also doesn't care about anything but making money
--MAIN CHARACTER--
Kyle Drezik: One of the popular kids in school, even though he is popular, he still is friends with Joey.
Film Setting
(Sounds of the kids foot steps on the gravel, crunching of rocks from under his shoes, "The air is somewhat cold, you can see his breath and the sound of trees swaying in the wind)
(Setting: Dark evening sky, Cool Crisp air, A kid walking on his own shadows, the street lamp's light causes the boys shadow to go from small to big and then disappear
|The kid is walking to an abandoned billboard sign. The only thing covering it is a white background. A small cut in the middle, enough room to look through. (The Boy walks up to the opening in the billboard. kid cups his hands and peeks through and sees a whole new world before his eyes.|
3. Sarah Arnold
The format of the script had a lot of errors. No transitions or shots were used, but instead were put into the action or as description. There were a few capitalization/ grammar problems, and punctuation need to be watched for errors.
The story line still is clear, but there are a few lines that make no sense or are no needed at all. The art discipline was included by adding the art project and art room. Also the flying images within the vision the character had. The length was affected by the descriptions. The scene headings need to be finished and the camera shots need to be explained as to what is being seen.
01/11/10, 06:23 pm
2. Sarah Arnold
The conversation in which Alex and I had was brief, as there were not many flaws in the script. We discussed the problems and what the more interesting part of the script was and what obsticales may get in his way during the production of the film.
11/30/09, 07:03 pm
1. Sarah Arnold
Alex's script was formatted very well. He had a few indentation problems, and some of the script descriptions were capitilized when other descriptions were not. He had a few capitilization/ grammar problems and some incorrect punctuation. His storyline was very clear and you were able to really visualize what it was he wanted to do with the film. He used his art by including an art room and an art project. The length of the script was actually affected by the descriptions. They were really in-depth, but carried out the film for a while.
11/30/09, 07:00 pm