BEGINNIG OF LIFE
Pain and suffering threw the air
Screaming, tears of worries
Cold air rushing through my body
Stomach swollen like a basketball
Shiny steel touching my stomach
Unknowing what is going on
Monster with masks running around
Mom screaming what is going on
Helpless, scared, and in shock
Screaming bloody murder
Please save my baby
The assignment called for me to think of a time of crisis. The idea of the poem came to me when I remembered a moment of crisis from my childhood. During my mother’s pregnancy, my intestines had twisted and ruptured. Going through the experience was hell for my family. Not knowing what to do. Half of my family was at the emergency room. Everyone else just prayed for me to be fine. I was my mother’s first child and surprised she had more kids after that whole thing happened. It had taken three months but everything in the end was fine. Shiny steel means blade; Monster with masks is the doctors.

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1. Mr. Boland
Hey Felix... you did an AWESOME job on this assignment! You hit it out of the park and touched all of the bases! - Mr. Boland
11/01/07, 07:22 pm